Monday, March 4, 2024

Help me, PLEASE? Pt.2

I couldn't decide on which way to take the story.

If the boyfriend looked like THAT as a woman, he'd clearly been doing it for awhile. His girlfriend would have SOME idea he was doing it, right? And if she knew already and didn't say anything, she'd be cool with it, right? But what if she wasn't? What if NONE of that is true? What would he do then?

I made a caption for each direction it could go. Is one way better than the other? 



 

4 comments:

  1. I loved both but a little more #2. Best development best gif...

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  2. I prefer 2. I mean for one thing that gif is so sexy. I absolutely love an our switch in stories. It's such a sexy turn of phrase when his or hers becomes our.

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